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old things

Wed Sep 15, 2004, 12:56 PM
I am sumbitting some of my older poetry. I'd always been of the opinion that my old stuff sucks, but as I rummaged through it recently to show it to a friend, I noticed that there is a bit of potential in some of it. So I decided to post it.
I discouraged critique on all of them. These pieces are old and I feel that they need to remain just the way they are. I just want to share them and I'd love some comments.
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~DressedInBlack Sep 16, 2004, 2:06:03 AM
werd ich mir anschaun... :)

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„Ich mag das so, dass du schweigst, wenn du weißt, dass es an der Zeit ist“.
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~poeticinsanity Sep 16, 2004, 11:25:48 AM
:confused: If you think they have potential, why don't you want them to change? You're contradicting yourself :no: lol :D

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To do is to be [Descartes] To be is to do [Voltaire] Do be do be do [Frank Sinatra]
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~BlackEyedGirl Sep 16, 2004, 12:08:05 PM
Lol, no. That's not how I meant it. I meant that they showed that I have potential. And I have changed and become a better writer. They sort of bear witness to this transition, and that is why I don't want them changed. They were what I was capable of at the time.

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"Robert ... I'm trying to change my heathen ways ... would you have my soul condemned over rice?"
- Bucky
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~poeticinsanity Sep 16, 2004, 12:14:36 PM
lol yeah I knew that, I was just picking on you.

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To do is to be [Descartes] To be is to do [Voltaire] Do be do be do [Frank Sinatra]
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~BlackEyedGirl Sep 16, 2004, 12:27:33 PM
Ah. Heh. Welllll ... I'll forgive you. :P
:hug:

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"Robert ... I'm trying to change my heathen ways ... would you have my soul condemned over rice?"
- Bucky
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~poeticinsanity Sep 16, 2004, 12:31:49 PM
I don't recall apologizing. :P

:hug: (You now I'm kidding, right?)

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To do is to be [Descartes] To be is to do [Voltaire] Do be do be do [Frank Sinatra]
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~BlackEyedGirl Sep 16, 2004, 12:45:56 PM
Lol. Yeah, I know you're kidding. 'tis alright.

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"Robert ... I'm trying to change my heathen ways ... would you have my soul condemned over rice?"
- Bucky
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