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Sinful by ~BlackEyedGirl:iconBlackEyedGirl:

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Our nights are stolen:
           our lovers,
           our lives
stripped at the door,

leaving only
our scarred bodies
suspended between fleeting present and
uncertain future.
©2007-2009 ~BlackEyedGirl
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Author's Comments

wishful thinking

ETA: I'm still staring in disbelief at my messages and wondering whether I'm dreaming. I can't believe one of my pieces has been selected as a DD. It's all freakin' amazing!! Thank you so much for nominating and selecting me, and for all of the comments I've received on this and other pieces. You guys seriously rock my world!! :P

Daily Deviation

Given 2009-01-29

This indulgent poetic treat Sinful by ~BlackEyedGirl, is a brief but painfully haunting poem that gave me excited chills as I read it. It is far too simply beautiful to be missed! (Featured by ^LadyLincoln)

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~inomine Dec 2, 2007, 6:38:09 AM
gefällt mir...

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wäre das meer ein fluss, würde ich fliessen...
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~BlackEyedGirl Dec 2, 2007, 8:07:39 AM
danke
(habe mir auch mal deine gallery angeschaut, sehr beeindruckend. ich mag deinen stil, du schaffst es irgendwie einzelne momente in all ihren facetten zu beschreiben. klasse.)

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"Robert ... I'm trying to change my heathen ways ... would you have my soul condemned over rice?"
- Bucky
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*ThornyEnglishRose Feb 1, 2008, 2:27:50 AM
Short and sweet - lovely imagery. Good work. :)
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~Elmara Feb 1, 2008, 5:22:16 AM
cuts like a shard yet smooth like a satin. very well written. :favlove:

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:jedi: Dont Worry...Sith Happens :jedi:

The Poetry.. That comes from the squaring off between.. And the circling is worth it.. Finding beauty in the dissonance.. -Tool
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~spacegirl92 Feb 1, 2008, 1:25:04 PM
In just a short number of words you have created an intense emotional experience for me. Well done!

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Her hair was night
Her eyes were ice
Her smile was fire
Her wings were unlife
And they called her...
Angelique

(c)spacegirl92
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`PunknEra Feb 1, 2008, 7:29:48 PM
It's nice to see such a short piece be so thought provoking. This is really a very intriguing poem. I have nothing negative to see and I don't think there is any way to make it better, so good job!

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Punknera is no more! I am now *ATrue.
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~blue-strawberry Feb 3, 2008, 10:41:38 AM
oh, this is brilliant. Extremely thought provoking.

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You have four nostrils, just to let you know.
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~BlackEyedGirl Feb 5, 2008, 6:23:27 AM
Thank you!

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"Robert ... I'm trying to change my heathen ways ... would you have my soul condemned over rice?"
- Bucky
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~BlackEyedGirl Feb 5, 2008, 6:24:11 AM
Thanks for the great comment. That's a neat way of describing the poem.

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"Robert ... I'm trying to change my heathen ways ... would you have my soul condemned over rice?"
- Bucky
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